Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in a small town than a big city.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Example Essay Response A
Planning Notes/Outline (5 mins):
Disagree - big city is better
R1 – Education
Ex – schools, universities, my own experience
R2 – Career
Ex – companies, range of businesses
R3 – Services and infrastructure
Ex – Health/hospitals, government offices, banking
Essay
It is a common fact that the world is becoming increasingly urbanized. In almost every country in the world – and certainly in the developed or developing countries – the trend has been for more and more people to move from small towns in the countryside to larger cities. This trend echoes my own preference for living in a big city rather than a small town. While there are certainly benefits to living in small towns, I think the advantages of big city life are compelling. Among them, I would say that opportunities in education and career and access to services and infrastructure are the most prominent.
Education plays a major role in people’s future success and prosperity. Whereas smaller towns in the countryside are lucky to have one basic school serving a very small population, cities always have a huge range of schools, colleges and universities on offer. It is also the general trend that the better teachers tend to be located in schools and universities in cities, where the salaries and benefits tend to be more attractive. Personally, I have the unique experience of having attended secondary schools in both the countryside and a large city. While the country school was friendly and enjoyed small class sizes, it couldn’t compete with the larger school I attended in a city, where there was a richer range of subjects available and better quality and more experienced teachers to learn from. Competition with a large number of more talented students also drove me to study harder and take my education more seriously. Moreover, once I graduated from high school, there was a range of very good universities close to my home that I could attend. Now, as a parent myself, I can see the obvious advantage of bringing my children up in a large city and giving them the opportunity to attend good quality schools and then university.
A good education is essential for career opportunities, and access to good jobs is another important reason why large cities are preferable to small towns. Aside from the fact that cities have a huge range of different jobs available, the larger and more successful companies are almost invariably located (or have important branches or offices) in big cities. By contrast, small towns have a very limited range and number of jobs available to people. Some of my first jobs included working in sales and marketing and hospitality, including valuable experience with major brand companies and large hotels. I was also able to work my way up and move to rival companies, increasing my experience and salary on an ongoing basis. Had I been located in a small town in the countryside, I would have been limited to very basic jobs without opportunities to advance far or change companies as my skills and experience developed.
Aside from these obvious advantages in terms of education and career, large cities are preferable to me on account of the services and infrastructure that are available there. An obvious example is health, with cities having many hospitals and clinics on offer – many of which are specialized to treat particular ailments. These facilities are also more amply prepared for emergency cases, and the availability and travel time associated with ambulances is obviously better than what could be expected in a small town in the countryside. In addition, things like government offices and banking services are absolutely more accessible when one lives in a city. One of my relatives lives in a small town, and she often complains about the frustration and tedium involved in having to drive long distances to do simple things like access government services or do simple banking. Conversely, living in a large city with easy access to these things has made my own life far more convenient.
Small towns and large cities each have their advantages and disadvantages, and there are certainly aspects of living in a small town (for example, friendly people, easy-going lifestyle, clean environment) that I would appreciate. However, issues like education, career opportunities, and access to important services hold a lot more weight for me personally, hence my clear preference for living in a large city where these things are amply available. It would seem that many other people in the world have a similar inclination, as the growing global trend towards urban living suggests.
Example Essay Response B
Planning Notes/Outline (5 mins):
Agree – small town is better
R1 – Social aspects
Ex – Personal experience, friendliness, closeness, safety, responsibility
R2 – Environment
Ex – Air and noise
R3 – Lifestyle
Ex – Access to outdoor activities, sports
Essay
I have several friends who grew up in small towns and moved to big cities in early adulthood. In many cases, these friends inevitably ended up relocating back to their small towns, or at least spoke yearningly of the good lives they enjoyed there. Acknowledging that there are obvious benefits to living in a large city, my friends’ reasons for preferring small town living to big city life echo my own. Considering things like the social aspects, environment and lifestyle available in small towns, I have to agree and say that this is the life I would prefer.
First of all, it is a well-known fact that many small towns feature closely-knit communities. While it is true that a big city affords the opportunity to meet a much larger range of different people of different backgrounds, there is a certain comfort that comes from living in a small society where everybody knows everybody else. I spent a period of my own childhood in a small country town, and I vividly recall how warm it felt to be greeted by name (and to know the name) of almost every person I met on the street on a daily basis. In addition, this closeness also generates things like greater safety and an earlier sense of responsibility. People in small towns tend to look out for the other people they know living there, and are more careful in their own behavior – knowing full well that any misdeed they might commit will be known by everyone in the town. The relative anonymity so common in big cities can often erode both of these important principles; people there tend to worry only about themselves and may be more willing to commit anti-social behavior, knowing that nobody around them can identify them.
Beyond the social aspects, living in a small town often yields the obvious benefit of having access to a cleaner environment. The pollution generated by large factories and colossal amounts of traffic is usually missing from small towns. Moreover, the drastically smaller amount of people, businesses and cars means that smaller towns tend to be a whole lot quieter. Having experienced both kinds of places, I confess that there can be a certain exciting “buzz” to large cities, with all the movement and action going on there. However, this just cannot compete with the wonderfully clean air and quiet I recall from life in a small rural town. Nights were serenely quiet and a sky full of stars was on display on a regular basis. These aspects might sound simplistic or even boring to a big city dweller, but they are things I (and almost everyone else I have known hailing from small towns) always missed dearly when I was living in the “big smoke”.
Hand in hand with both the close-knit society and clean surroundings comes the third great advantage of small town living – the wonderful lifestyle. Small towns are usually surrounded by countryside or close to the coast or other natural attractions, making access to outdoor activities like hiking, fishing, swimming, and camping very easy. In addition, traditional sports tend to be a major part of life in rural towns as well. Big cities do, of course, have their own unique attractions for lifestyle as well, but from my experience these often involve more observing than doing. For example, people in a big city are more likely to go and watch a game of football, whereas people in a small town would be more likely to actually play the sport. In addition, while city folk might go on fishing or camping trips once or twice a year, people in small towns have the opportunity to do these sorts of things on a monthly or even weekly basis.
Small towns and large cities each have their respective advantages and disadvantages, and there are certainly aspects of living in a big city (for example, access to museums and major events, better schools, and so forth) that I would appreciate. However, issues like social cohesion, environmental surroundings, and access to an active lifestyle hold a lot more weight for me personally, hence my clear preference for living in a small town where these things are amply available. I also consider these as being important aspects in my own children’s upbringing, which makes living in a small town an even more attractive prospect.
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